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Business Studies Report Card Comments

Free example Business Studies report card comments for case studies and business concepts, grouped by how the student is doing. Each comment follows a clear structure parents appreciate: a strength, specific evidence, a next step, and a practical idea to try at home. Change the name and details to fit your student.

Excellent progress

Working above the expected standard

Amara is working above the expected standard in Business Studies and has had an excellent term. Highlights this term include understanding business concepts and presenting ideas clearly. She approaches every task with excellent effort and determination. Amara is a polite and cooperative member of the class. To make further progress, she should focus on structuring longer answers. At home, practising essay plans would help. I commend Amara on an outstanding term and encourage her to keep challenging herself.

Liam has achieved outstanding results in Business Studies this term. He has shown real ability in applying knowledge to real businesses and using business terminology correctly. His effort is exemplary, and he always gives of his best. Liam is a pleasure to teach and a wonderful role model for his classmates. He would benefit from focusing on applying theory to case studies. At home, talking about local businesses and how they run would help. I commend Liam on an outstanding term and encourage him to keep challenging himself.

Thandi is an exceptionally capable student in Business Studies who consistently produces work of a high standard. She has shown real ability in analysing case studies and evaluating business decisions. Her effort is exemplary, and she always gives of her best. Thandi is a polite and cooperative member of the class. She would benefit from focusing on learning key terminology. At home, making flash cards of key terms would help. I commend Thandi on an outstanding term and encourage her to keep challenging herself.

Good progress

Working securely at the expected standard

Daniel has had a successful term and has a secure understanding of the work covered in Business Studies. He has shown real ability in understanding business concepts and presenting ideas clearly. He works hard and completes tasks carefully. Daniel is a pleasure to teach and a wonderful role model for his classmates. In Term 3, his target is evaluating rather than describing. At home, discussing the pros and cons of business decisions would help. I commend Daniel on a productive term.

Zara has had a successful term and has a secure understanding of the work covered in Business Studies. She is particularly strong at applying knowledge to real businesses and using business terminology correctly. She applies herself well in lessons. Zara has a positive attitude and relates well to others. She would benefit from focusing on structuring longer answers. At home, practising essay plans would help. I commend Zara on a productive term.

Sipho is working securely at the expected standard in Business Studies. He has shown real ability in analysing case studies and evaluating business decisions. He applies himself well in lessons. Sipho is a pleasure to teach and a wonderful role model for his classmates. To make further progress, he should focus on applying theory to case studies. At home, talking about local businesses and how they run would help. I commend Sipho on a productive term.

Developing

Making steady progress towards the expected standard

Grace is developing well in Business Studies and is making steady progress. Highlights this term include understanding business concepts and presenting ideas clearly. She applies herself well in lessons. Her behaviour in class is satisfactory. To make further progress, she should focus on learning key terminology. At home, making flash cards of key terms would help. Grace has the ability to achieve more and should aim high in Term 3.

Noah is developing well in Business Studies and is making steady progress. He has shown real ability in applying knowledge to real businesses and using business terminology correctly. He works hard and completes tasks carefully. Noah has a positive attitude and relates well to others. To make further progress, he should focus on evaluating rather than describing. At home, discussing the pros and cons of business decisions would help. Noah has the ability to achieve more and should aim high in Term 3.

Aisha is moving towards the expected standard in Business Studies and has shown clear improvement. Highlights this term include analysing case studies and evaluating business decisions. She works hard and completes tasks carefully. Aisha behaves sensibly most of the time. She would benefit from focusing on structuring longer answers. At home, practising essay plans would help. Aisha has the ability to achieve more and should aim high in Term 3.

Needs support

Still working towards the expected standard

Ethan is building a foundation in Business Studies and needs further support to reach the expected standard. Highlights this term include understanding business concepts and presenting ideas clearly. He puts in a satisfactory level of effort. Ethan is a polite and cooperative member of the class. He would benefit from focusing on applying theory to case studies. At home, talking about local businesses and how they run would help. With greater consistency, Ethan can achieve far more in Term 3.

Mia is still working towards the expected standard in Business Studies. She has shown real ability in applying knowledge to real businesses and using business terminology correctly. She puts in a satisfactory level of effort. Her behaviour in class is satisfactory. She would benefit from focusing on learning key terminology. At home, making flash cards of key terms would help. With greater consistency, Mia can achieve far more in Term 3.

Kabelo is still working towards the expected standard in Business Studies. Highlights this term include analysing case studies and evaluating business decisions. He puts in a satisfactory level of effort. Kabelo has a positive attitude and relates well to others. He would benefit from focusing on evaluating rather than describing. At home, discussing the pros and cons of business decisions would help. With greater consistency, Kabelo can achieve far more in Term 3.

Strengths to mention

  • Understanding business concepts
  • Analysing case studies
  • Applying knowledge to real businesses
  • Presenting ideas clearly
  • Evaluating business decisions
  • Using business terminology correctly

Next steps and targets

  • Applying theory to case studies
  • Structuring longer answers
  • Evaluating rather than describing
  • Learning key terminology

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