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Science Report Card Comments
Free example science report card comments for investigations, observations and scientific vocabulary, grouped by how the student is doing. Each comment follows a clear structure parents appreciate: a strength, specific evidence, a next step, and a practical idea to try at home. Change the name and details to fit your student.
Excellent progress
Working above the expected standardAmara is working above the expected standard in Science and has had an excellent term. Highlights this term include making careful observations and recording results neatly in tables. She approaches every task with excellent effort and determination. Amara is a polite and cooperative member of the class. To make further progress, she should focus on understanding how to make a test fair. At home, simple experiments, such as testing which ball bounces highest, would build this understanding. Congratulations on a superb term, Amara!
Liam has achieved outstanding results in Science this term. He has shown real ability in making sensible predictions and working safely during practical activities. His effort is exemplary, and he always gives of his best. Liam is a pleasure to teach and a wonderful role model for his classmates. He would benefit from focusing on using scientific vocabulary in written answers. At home, discussing how everyday things work would help. Congratulations on a superb term, Liam!
Thandi is an exceptionally capable student in Science who consistently produces work of a high standard. She has shown real ability in using scientific vocabulary correctly and drawing accurate diagrams. Her effort is exemplary, and she always gives of her best. Thandi is a polite and cooperative member of the class. She would benefit from focusing on presenting results in graphs. At home, drawing simple graphs of everyday data together would help. I commend Thandi on an outstanding term.
Good progress
Working securely at the expected standardDaniel has had a successful term and has a secure understanding of the work covered in Science. He has shown real ability in explaining scientific ideas clearly and showing curiosity about the natural world. He works hard and completes tasks carefully. Daniel is a pleasure to teach and a wonderful role model for his classmates. In Term 3, his target is labelling diagrams accurately. At home, drawing and labelling plants or animals in the garden would help. Well done, Daniel!
Zara has had a successful term and has a secure understanding of the work covered in Science. She is particularly strong at making careful observations and measuring carefully with equipment. She applies herself well in lessons. Zara has a positive attitude and relates well to others. She would benefit from focusing on recording observations in detail. At home, keeping a simple nature or weather diary would help. Well done, Zara!
Sipho is working securely at the expected standard in Science. He has shown real ability in making sensible predictions and working well in practical groups. He applies himself well in lessons. Sipho is a pleasure to teach and a wonderful role model for his classmates. To make further progress, he should focus on explaining results using evidence. At home, asking how he can tell when discussing everyday observations would help. I commend Sipho on a productive term.
Developing
Making steady progress towards the expected standardGrace is developing well in Science and is making steady progress. Highlights this term include asking thoughtful scientific questions and using scientific vocabulary correctly. She applies herself well in lessons. Her behaviour in class is satisfactory. To make further progress, she should focus on drawing conclusions from her results. At home, discussing what happened, and why, after a simple experiment would help. Keep up the steady work, Grace.
Noah is developing well in Science and is making steady progress. He has shown real ability in recording results neatly in tables and explaining scientific ideas clearly. He works hard and completes tasks carefully. Noah has a positive attitude and relates well to others. To make further progress, he should focus on making predictions with reasons. At home, asking what he thinks will happen, and why, would help. Keep up the steady work, Noah.
Aisha is moving towards the expected standard in Science and has shown clear improvement. Highlights this term include working safely during practical activities and measuring carefully with equipment. She works hard and completes tasks carefully. Aisha behaves sensibly most of the time. She would benefit from focusing on understanding how to make a test fair. At home, simple experiments, such as testing which ball bounces highest, would build this understanding. I look forward to seeing her continue to grow in Term 3.
Needs support
Still working towards the expected standardEthan is building a foundation in Science and needs further support to reach the expected standard. Highlights this term include drawing accurate diagrams and working well in practical groups. He puts in a satisfactory level of effort. Ethan is a polite and cooperative member of the class. He would benefit from focusing on using scientific vocabulary in written answers. At home, discussing how everyday things work would help. With continued support at home and school, I am confident he will make good progress in Term 3.
Mia is still working towards the expected standard in Science. She has shown real ability in asking thoughtful scientific questions and showing curiosity about the natural world. She puts in a satisfactory level of effort. Her behaviour in class is satisfactory. She would benefit from focusing on presenting results in graphs. At home, drawing simple graphs of everyday data together would help. With continued support at home and school, I am confident she will make good progress in Term 3.
Kabelo is still working towards the expected standard in Science. Highlights this term include making careful observations and recording results neatly in tables. He puts in a satisfactory level of effort. Kabelo has a positive attitude and relates well to others. He would benefit from focusing on labelling diagrams accurately. At home, drawing and labelling plants or animals in the garden would help. With continued support at home and school, I am confident he will make good progress in Term 3.
Strengths to mention
- Making careful observations
- Asking thoughtful scientific questions
- Making sensible predictions
- Recording results neatly in tables
- Using scientific vocabulary correctly
- Working safely during practical activities
- Explaining scientific ideas clearly
- Drawing accurate diagrams
- Measuring carefully with equipment
- Showing curiosity about the natural world
- Working well in practical groups
Next steps and targets
- Explaining results using evidence
- Understanding how to make a test fair
- Labelling diagrams accurately
- Drawing conclusions from their results
- Using scientific vocabulary in written answers
- Recording observations in detail
- Making predictions with reasons
- Presenting results in graphs